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You are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between your properties is old and in poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of building a new fence. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter • say what the problems are • explain how a new fence will solve the problems • suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost

You are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between your properties is old and in poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of building a new fence. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter • say what the problems are • explain how a new fence will solve the problems • suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost xnj9
Dear John, I am writing this letter to bring an issue to your attention, which we ought to solve now. Describing a bit about the problem, this is related to nothing but the difficulty your two dogs are causing to us. As almost 10 years have passed since we are living beside each other, our fence needs an urgent renovation, which is almost damaged. To make the matter worse, your two dogs, throughout whole day, tend to jump in our area since it's too easy for them to do so. Due to this, my children become so frightened and could not even wander freely in our own house. Looking at the benefits of having a new fence, since there would a strong barrier between yours and my house, not only it would prevent dogs to come in our area, but this will also ensure that no mishappening will occur in future. Now let’s also discuss about the cost. I think it will be great if we share the expenses because we both are sharing that very fence. Should you have any other things to discuss, don’t hesitate to drop me a line. I hope you will consider this matter as soon as possible. Yours truly, Daizy D.
Dear John,

I am writing this letter to bring an issue to your attention, which we ought to solve
now
.

Describing a bit about the problem, this
is related
to nothing
but
the difficulty your two dogs are causing to us. As almost 10 years have passed since we are living beside each other, our fence needs an urgent renovation, which is almost damaged. To
make
the matter worse, your two dogs, throughout whole day, tend to jump in our area since it's too easy for them to do
so
. Due to this, my children become
so
frightened and could not even wander
freely
in our
own
house
.

Looking at the benefits of having a new fence, since there would a strong barrier between yours and my
house
, not
only
it would
prevent
dogs to
come
in our area,
but
this will
also
ensure that no
mishappening
will occur
in future
.

Now
let
’s
also
discuss about the
cost. I
think
it will be great if we share the expenses
because
we both are sharing that
very
fence.

Should you have any other things to discuss, don’t hesitate to drop me a line. I hope you will consider this matter as
soon
as possible.

Yours
truly
,

Daizy
D.
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IELTS letter You are having problems with a neighbour’s animals because the fence between your properties is old and in poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of building a new fence. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter • say what the problems are • explain how a new fence will solve the problems • suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost

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  American English
8 paragraphs
207 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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