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letter to garbage collection 1. describe 2. affects 3. what needs to be done

letter to garbage collection 1. describe 2. affects 3. what needs to be done R5wyY
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of himayathnagar writing this letter on behalf of community member. We were expecting a change for the couple of days, however, at present we need an immediate solution. Firstly, I appreciate the contribution staff of local council made to ensure the cleanliness of the society, however, there are few drawbacks I would like to bring into light. The staff are not collecting the waste from the dustbin which is from the morning, when they visit again in the evening. Due to this, the wild cats and dogs litter the garbage. Additionally, no one is coming on public holidays which makes the situation even worse. Bad odor spreads all along creating an unhealthy environment, moreover, the overflow of garbage has become a breeding ground for mosquitoes and flies which makes us prone to the infectious diseases. I have come up with few suggestions for this problem. We can have a new staff appointed to work in shifts so, can get help with the collection even in the mornings and evenings, furthermore, they can also work on public holidays as a result solving the critical situation and leading towards a healthy path. Yours Sincerely,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am a resident of
himayathnagar
writing this letter on behalf of community member. We were expecting a
change
for the couple of days,
however
, at present we need an immediate solution.

Firstly
, I appreciate the contribution staff of local council made to ensure the cleanliness of the society,
however
, there are few drawbacks I would like to bring into light. The staff are not collecting the waste from the dustbin which is from the morning, when they visit again in the evening. Due to this, the wild cats and dogs litter the garbage.
Additionally
, no one is coming on public holidays which
makes
the situation even worse.

Bad
odor spreads all along creating an unhealthy environment,
moreover
, the overflow of garbage has become a breeding ground for mosquitoes and flies which
makes
us prone to the infectious diseases. I have
come
up with few suggestions for this problem.

We can have a new staff appointed to work in shifts
so
, can
get
help
with the collection even in the mornings and evenings,
furthermore
, they can
also
work on public holidays
as a result
solving the critical situation and leading towards a healthy path.

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter letter to garbage collection 1. describe 2. affects 3. what needs to be done

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
200 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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