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motivetional letter for stipendium hungaricum

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Dear admission office I am writing this letter to show my interest in bachelor degree scholarship program for economics science at stipendium hungaricum. It has been my long awaited desire to study in economical science. I am form the country called Ethiopia which is country of beauty and variety of culture. But most people know the country us the poorest country in the world. I believe that I am one of a few people that can be a solution for my country problem. I know this sounds like childish fantasy for most people my age, but I feel like this is my destination and I growing personally in to it. My passion for economics started when I was in preparatory. Students who reached the preparatory level are asked to choose from social science and natural science which determine the path they took in university. I remember the first economics class I attended. From that time, I got hooked to economics and all the related subject, and my hard word is also reflected by my grades. I have never missed a class and I always participated actively. After I finished preparatory I was eager to learn outside my country to gain good education form countries who excel on the knowledge they offer. Studying in hungary will be a good fit for me. It will help me gain the knowledge I desperately need to pursue my goals. Studying with peoples of different background help me to observe and learn from different perspective. I am certain that I will be prized addition to the program. If you gave me the chance am sure that I will exceed you expectations.
Dear admission office

I am writing this letter to
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show
my interest in bachelor degree scholarship program for
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economics
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science
at
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stipendium
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hungaricum
. It has been my long awaited desire to study in economical
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science
. I am form the
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country
called Ethiopia which is
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country
of beauty and variety of culture.
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But
most
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people
know the
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country
us the poorest
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country
in the world. I believe that I am one of a few
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people
that can be a solution for my
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country
problem. I know this sounds like childish fantasy for most
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people
my age,
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but
I feel like this is my destination and I growing
personally
in to it.

My passion for
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economics
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started
when I was in preparatory. Students who reached the preparatory level
are asked
to choose from social
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science
and natural
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science
which determine the path they took in university. I remember the
first
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economics
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class
I attended. From that time, I
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got
hooked to
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economics
and all the related subject, and my
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hard
word is
also
reflected by my grades. I have never missed a
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class
and I always participated
actively
.
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I finished preparatory I was eager to learn outside my
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country
to gain
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good
education form
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countries
who excel on the knowledge they offer.

Studying in
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hungary
will be a
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good
fit for me. It will
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help
me gain the knowledge I
desperately
need to pursue my goals. Studying with
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peoples
of
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different
background
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help
me to observe and learn from
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different
perspective. I am certain that I will
be prized
addition to the program.
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If
you gave me the chance am sure that I will exceed you expectations.

IELTS letter motivetional letter for stipendium hungaricum

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
276 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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