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You booked a three-week holiday to costa rica with ‘your holiday travel agent’. You are dissatisfied with the holiday. Write to ‘your holiday travel agent’ for the same. In your letter - Introduce yourself - Describe difficulties you went through - Request some amount of refund or compensation.

You booked a three-week holiday to costa rica with ‘your holiday travel agent’. You are dissatisfied with the holiday. Write to ‘your holiday travel agent’ for the same. In your letter - Introduce yourself - Describe difficulties you went through - Request some amount of refund or compensation. YyL9V
Dear Mr Specter, I am a regular customer of your prestigious travelling company, 'Go have fun'' and have been using your services for past five years. I never had any issues during my trips before and was thoroughly satisfied with the services. However, my recent trip to 'Costa Rica' has changed my perception. Ergo, I am writing this letter to express my sheer dissatisfaction and disappointment towards your company. Two months ago, you have planned a three-week trip for me and my fiance. We both were thrilled by the exquisite tour package we were presented with and were looking forward to this trip. It was meant to be a trip of a lifetime for us; unfortunately, it turned out to be the worst nightmare as the shuttle service, which we were promised, was nowhere to be found. We somehow managed to reach our hotel, 'The Plaza'; the warm welcome we received from the staff was was commendable. But, soon after reaching our room 204 on the second floor, we found out that the air conditioner is not working and we had to wait for 3 hours for the technician to fix it. Apart from the menaces we faced in the hotel, there was another problem waiting for us. The first day of our trip was planned for picturesque sightseeing, but the tour guide, Robert, never showed up, and our whole day was spent in the room. Because of the aforementioned events, we were highly annoyed and we request you to compensate half of the amount we spent on the bookings for this trip, which equates to £365. I look forward to a favourable response and hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Simranjeet Kaur.
Dear Mr Specter,

I am a regular customer of your prestigious travelling
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company
, 'Go have fun'' and have been using your services for past five years. I never had any issues during my
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trips
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before
and was
thoroughly
satisfied with the services.
However
, my recent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trip
to 'Costa Rica' has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
my perception. Ergo, I am writing this letter to express my sheer dissatisfaction and disappointment towards your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.

Two months ago, you have planned a three-week
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trip
for me and my
'fiance' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "fiancé"
fiance
. We both
were thrilled
by the exquisite tour package we
were presented
with and were looking forward to this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trip
. It
was meant
to be a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trip
of a lifetime for us; unfortunately, it turned out to be the worst nightmare as the shuttle service, which we
were promised
, was nowhere to
be found
. We somehow managed to reach our hotel, 'The Plaza'; the warm welcome we received from the staff
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was was
commendable.
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But
,
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soon
after reaching our room 204 on the second floor, we found out that the air conditioner is not
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
working and
we had to wait for 3 hours for the technician to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
it.

Apart from the menaces we faced in the hotel, there was another problem waiting for us. The
first
day of our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trip
was planned
for picturesque sightseeing,
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but
the tour guide, Robert, never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
up, and our whole day
was spent
in the room.
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Because
of the aforementioned
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events
, we were
highly
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annoyed and
we request you to compensate half of the amount we spent on the bookings for this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trip
, which equates to £365.

I look forward to a
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favourable
response and hearing from you
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Simranjeet
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Kaur
.
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IELTS letter You booked a three-week holiday to costa rica with ‘your holiday travel agent’. You are dissatisfied with the holiday. Write to ‘your holiday travel agent’ for the same. In your letter - Introduce yourself - Describe difficulties you went through - Request some amount of refund or compensation.

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283 words
5.5
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