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Complain letter for a student.

Complain letter for a student. JKoBD
Dear madam, I am writing to express my concern about a student is named Alisa in dormitory of university in Tashkent. We stay in the room as 4 girls. Firstly when I were doing my homework it interfered with me listening to loud music and I could not concentrate and that was why I could not do my homework and my teacher scolded me. A further cause she does not respect anyone she treats everyone rudely and especially she takes my things away without questioning. I don't like it. Her habits prevent me from concentrating and preparing for class she is also capricious girl which makes it is very difficult for me to live with her. I do not usually complain, but as a loyal student. I hope you will be interested in my comments. And solving these problems I beg you to help me move to another room. I hope you will take these points in consideration. I look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely Anna Johnson.
Dear madam, I am writing to express my concern about a student
is named
Alisa in dormitory of university in Tashkent. We stay in the room as 4 girls.
Firstly
when I
were
doing my homework it interfered with me listening to loud music and I could not concentrate and that was why I could not do my homework and my teacher scolded me. A
further
cause she
does not respect anyone she treats everyone
rudely
and
especially
she takes my things away without questioning. I don't like it. Her habits
prevent
me from concentrating and preparing for
class
she is
also
capricious girl which
makes
it is
very
difficult for me to
live
with her. I do not
usually
complain,
but
as a loyal student. I hope you will
be interested
in my comments. And solving these problems I beg you to
help
me
move
to another room. I hope you will take these points in consideration. I look forward to your reply. Yours
sincerely
Anna Johnson.
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IELTS letter Complain letter for a student.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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