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Complain letter for a student.

Complain letter for a student. JKoBD

Dear madam, I am writing to express my concern about a student is named Alisa in dormitory of university in Tashkent. We stay in the room as 4 girls. Firstly when I were doing my homework it interfered with me listening to loud music and I could not concentrate and that was why I could not do my homework and my teacher scolded me. A further cause she does not respect anyone she treats everyone rudely and especially she takes my things away without questioning. I don't like it. Her habits prevent me from concentrating and preparing for class she is also capricious girl which makes it is very difficult for me to live with her. I do not usually complain, but as a loyal student. I hope you will be interested in my comments. And solving these problems I beg you to help me move to another room. I hope you will take these points in consideration. I look forward to your reply. Yours sincerely Anna Johnson.

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IELTS letter Complain letter for a student.

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

168 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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