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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement qw5X

Hello Sam, I hope you doing well. As you I was planning to come Canada for my vacation this year and I have asked you so much for the best time and place to visit as you are living over there for last 10 years. Now it seems that, I have to postpone this trip because we get appointment for my grandfather’s heart surgery and he wants everyone from family to be with him and the surgeon’s appointment is not easy to get. It took 6 months to us to take this appointment. I am really sorry for this as I know even you have applied your leaves as well to spend some time with me. However, after the surgery I can plan again for this trip in June and as you said before this would be great time to visit in Canada. Is that time will ok for you? I hope you will understand my situation and will suggest me further things for trip. Best wishes, Muhammad

Hello Sam,

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 Canada for my vacation this year and I have asked you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 to visit in Canada. Is that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
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 will ok for you?

I hope you will understand my situation and will suggest me further
 things for trip.

Best wishes,

Muhammad