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An English-speaking friend is coming to study at your college next year and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give advice about accomodation in the town describe the best thing about the college offer to show your friend around the college.

An English-speaking friend is coming to study at your college next year and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give advice about accomodation in the town describe the best thing about the college offer to show your friend around the college. 0bpB
Dear Mike I was very glad to know that you decided to study in my college. I have studied here for three years and I have not found any disadvantages for now. There are amazing and very qualified teachering staff. I think it is the most important. Of course we have modern campus with different useful buildings like a very beautiful study center in old fashion style with different workshops which you can visit after lessons, a big sportcomlex with a swimming pool and football peitch, library with the new books and articles and modern dormitory where you can find many amazing people. You will have to perfect introductory points to have a chance to live in the campus dormitory. If you not have enough points for it, you can rent some appartament or room in town. It is not a problem here. I want to offer you come and see it all. When you come I will make fantastic and very informative excursion about college and town for you. And after that this college will be the number one in your list. I hope to hear from you in the near future. 193 Alex Khokhlov
Dear Mike

I was
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glad to know that you decided to study in my college. I have studied here for three years and I have not found any disadvantages for
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now
. There are amazing and
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very
qualified
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teachering
staff. I
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think
it is the most
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important
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have modern campus with
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different
useful buildings like a
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very
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beautiful
study center in
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old
fashion style with
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different
workshops which you can visit after lessons, a
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big
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sportcomlex
with a swimming pool and football
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peitch
, library with the new books and articles and modern dormitory where you can find
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many
amazing
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people
.

You will
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have to
perfect introductory points to have a chance to
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live
in the campus dormitory. If you not have
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enough
points for it, you can rent
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some
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appartament
or room in town. It is not a problem here.

I want to offer you
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come
and
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see
it all. When you
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come
I will
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make
fantastic and
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very
informative excursion about college and town for you. And after that this college will be the number one in your list.

I hope to hear from you in the near future. 193

Alex
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Khokhlov

IELTS letter An English-speaking friend is coming to study at your college next year and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter give advice about accomodation in the town describe the best thing about the college offer to show your friend around the college.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
195 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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