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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement P09j
Dear Jayden, I wanted to give you some bad news regarding my visit to Canada to meet you next month. As you know I have been suffering from back problems after the sports injury I suffered while playing football 6 months ago. After a long wait I have finally received a doctor’s appointment but unfortunately, it is on the date I have my flight booking for Canada. I whole heartedly apologize for ruining our plans. I know we had planned a lot of things in our to do list like going to the casino, water park, etc. , but because of the current situation it has all gone through the drain. It was the first time we were going to meet each other after high school and I also you know how excited we both were to meet each other. I am sorry for it. But there is some good news too. After the doctor’s appointment, I can reschedule my travel plans. How about if come to Canada in the month of May as it will be summertime? That means nice whether to explore the beauty of Canada. I can’t wait to see you. Regards, Rahul
Dear Jayden,

I wanted to give you
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news regarding my visit to Canada to
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month. As you know I have been suffering from back problems after the sports injury I suffered while playing football 6 months ago. After a long wait I have
finally
received a doctor’s appointment
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but
unfortunately, it is on the date I have my flight booking for Canada.

I whole
heartedly
apologize for ruining our plans. I know we had planned
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a lot of
things in our
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to do
list like going to the casino, water park, etc.
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of the
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current
situation it has all gone through the drain. It was the
first
time we were going to
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meet
each other after high school and I
also
you know how excited we both were to
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meet
each other. I am sorry for it.

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But
there is
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some
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good
news too. After the doctor’s appointment, I can reschedule my travel plans. How about if
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come
to Canada in the month of May as it will be
Consider using "summer".
summertime
? That means nice whether to explore the beauty of Canada.

I can’t wait to
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see
you.

Regards,

Rahul
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IELTS letter You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

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  American English
7 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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