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Invite your friend to visit your new house

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Dear Sam, I hope winter is treating you well. I recently moved to a new house; and I wanted to share this good news with you. As you know, I have been hunting for a new house past six months. My excitement is on a different level at the moment. I am certain you will love my house, as it is by the lakeshore. I have a huge backyard where I plan to assemble a fountain, and practice gardening during summer. House is spacious, and fully equipped with a big balcony facing the lake. My neighbourhood is very quiet; however, weekends are loud. As the house is in the interior, it is away from the regular honkings. My neighbors are young, and they themselves party on weekends which allows me to the same. I am very happy with this new house, and I cannot wait anymore to see you visit my place. Please come soon, as summer is no farther. I hope you see you soon. Regards, Fiona
Dear Sam,

I hope winter is treating you well. I recently
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; and I wanted to share this
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with you.

As you know, I have been hunting for a
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new
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house
past six months. My excitement is on a
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different
level at the moment. I am certain you will
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love
my
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house
, as it is by the
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lakeshore
. I have a huge backyard where I plan to assemble a fountain, and practice gardening during summer.
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House
is spacious, and
fully
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big
balcony facing the lake.

My
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is
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quiet;
however
, weekends are loud. As the
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house
is in the interior, it is away from the regular
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honkings
. My neighbors are young, and they themselves party on weekends which
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allows
me to the same.

I am
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happy with this
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new
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house
, and I cannot wait anymore to
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see
you visit my place.
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come
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, as summer is no farther.

I hope you
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you
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.

Regards,

Fiona
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