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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course qjYw

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing to check if you could help me get into the Computer course that I recently read about on Harvard’s website named “Analytical Thinking with AI” under the diploma category. As the current trends are moving towards digitalization and automation, this programme will help me grow in my career. Being a computer geek myself I have always been intrigued about such subjects, and hence I’m interested in taking up this course as it will add to significant value to my domain expertise. As per the pre-requisites of this course, only those people can enrol who have completed an elementary course and I have never studied computing formally during my entire educational journey. I have always been into the banking sector after my graduation and I have never had the opportunity to learn something into analytics. Could you please let me know if you would be willing to make an exception, discuss my situation internally so that I would be eligible to enrol in this course? I would sincerely appreciate your help and your guidance. My contact details are: +1415503849 and respond at your earliest convenience. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Akshay Arora.

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