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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons. 72w2
Marriages is one of the lives changing event. It is the bonding of two people who would spent the rest of their life together. Unfortunately fixed marriage is still a common practice that us widely accepted today. We all know one of the happiest times in our life is seeing our true love walking down the aisle. They usually say you will feel "butterfly in your stomach" and I can attest with it. I usually do not cry, but when I saw my wife wearing the beautiful gown and walking towards me, I knew she was the one I would like to spend my whole. I am proud to say I have made the right choice of marrying her without any influenced from someone. Marrying a person should be by our own choice and free will. Marriage arrangements were inherited to our fore fathers. This is evidently especially to members of the monarch. A good example is Prince Charles and Princess Diana. By tradition members of the royal family especially the future king should be married to an individual who has a royal blood and not to a simple commoner. It is the responsibility of the parents who will choose their future husband or wife. This is also practiced by business tycoons. Their children at young age will be set to marry to some of their business partners daughter or son. This move is usually done to merge one family to another. Unfortunately, based on researched seventy percent of fixed marriage ends up in divorce. Marriages is one the sacred decision we have to take. He or she will be our life long partner through good and bad times. However, there are still traditions some individuals need to follow with any second thoughts and this is widely accepted in our community.
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saw
my wife wearing the
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beautiful
gown and walking towards me, I knew she was the one I would like to spend my whole. I am proud to say I have made the right choice of marrying her without any influenced from someone. Marrying a person should be by our
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own
choice and free will.

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example is Prince Charles and Princess Diana. By tradition members of the royal family
especially
the future king should
be married
to an individual who has a royal blood and not to a simple commoner. It is the responsibility of the parents who will choose their future husband or wife. This is
also
practiced by business tycoons. Their children at young age will
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to marry to
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of their business partners daughter or son. This
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marriage ends up in divorce.

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IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

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