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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it

You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it QG0P

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter regarding the plan about the new shopping centre to be built in my neighborhood. I was told from one of my colleagues about a developer who is thinking of building a shopping center in my neighborhood. Let me explain my thought, I feel it’s a great idea of opening a new shopping centre. Considering we don’t have any malls nearby, we have to travel to a nearby city, so it could be very useful in terms of groceries, children’s play area, movies and just to spend a nice Sunday with your family. Would you kindly provide me with some more information on it? I would like to know some detail like where it is going to be build, are we endangering any natural habitats; children of what age could visit; is there going to be a food court; merely some basic knowledge on it. Thank you for your consideration, Your faithfully, Adam.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding the plan about the new shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 to be built
 in my neighborhood. I was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 from one of my colleagues about a developer who is thinking of building a shopping center in my neighborhood.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
, I feel it’s a great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 of opening a new shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. Considering we don’t have any malls nearby, we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 travel to a nearby city, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it could be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 useful in terms of groceries, children’s play area, movies and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 to spend a nice Sunday with your family.

Would you kindly provide me with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 more information on it? I would like to know This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Did you mean "details"?details
detail
 like where it is going to be build, are we endangering any natural habitats; children of what age could visit; is there going to be a food court; merely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 basic knowledge on it.

Thank you for your consideration,

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
,

Adam. 