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A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head. In your letter: Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about Explain why would they be of interest to the students Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk

A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head. In your letter: Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about Explain why would they be of interest to the students Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk JedB
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to express my interest in your college’s international day as a foreigner student. It would be delightful if I have a chance to speak about my country to other friends. There are various students all over the world who come from different countries. However, just some of them are from Asia countries which are famous for special cultures. If I have an opportunity to introduce our country, culture, humans and foods, the international day will be really interesting. For instance, my country has a diverse culture because of 54 ethnic groups, and they will be surprised about the different cultures that they have never seen before. If possible, could you give me more detailed information relating to this event, such as available time for a talk or how could I register. I am looking forward to your consideration and having the chance to introduce my country. Thank you in advance. Sincerely, Hie.
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in your college’s international day as a foreigner student. It would be delightful if I have a chance to speak about my
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country
to other friends.

There are various students all over the world who
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come
from
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different
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countries
.
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,
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just
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some
of them are from Asia
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countries
which are
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famous
for special
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cultures
. If I have an opportunity to introduce our
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country
,
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culture
, humans and foods, the international day will be
The extreme adjective for interesting is "fascinating", or "exciting".
really interesting
.
For instance
, my
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country
has a diverse
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culture
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because
of 54 ethnic groups, and they will
be surprised
about the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cultures
that they have never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
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before
.

If possible, could you give me more detailed information relating to this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
, such as available time for a talk or how could I register.

I am looking forward to your consideration and having the chance to introduce my country.

Thank you in advance.

Sincerely
,

Hie.

IELTS letter A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures. Write a letter to the college head. In your letter: Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about Explain why would they be of interest to the students Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk

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8 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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