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You recently went to a public event ( for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter -tell your friend what the event was -explain why you think your friend would like the event -invite them to come to the event with you

You recently went to a public event ( for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter -tell your friend what the event was -explain why you think your friend would like the event -invite them to come to the event with you QJ09

Dear Martin I have recently been to the tommorow land music festival, I am writing to let you know about the most fascinating trip which I have experienced so far. As you know I am crazy about the music, therefore after repeated failure in order to book in advance, I finally got ticket 2 weeks ago, immediatelly after that I embarked on my journey with my wife. Tommorow land festival have been held once a year since 2012, it is 3 days intensive event and you can find various type of music bands there. I know you are eager to show your ability in playing guitar in front of the audience, It could be amazing experience for you because authorities let you to challange your talent. I would really grateful if you come with us next year, we will create a lot of memories together there, As I told you, it is better to book the tickets in advance. I look forward to hearing from you Best wishes Alireza

Dear Martin

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let
 you know about the most fascinating trip which I have experienced

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so
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This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAfter
after
 that I embarked on my journey with my wife. Possible spelling mistake found.Tomorrow
Tommorow
 land festival have been held
 once a year since 2012, it is 3 days intensive This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 and

you can find various type of music bands there.

I know you are eager to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 your ability in playing guitar in front of the audience, It could be amazing experience for you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 authorities This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you

to Possible spelling mistake found.challenge
challange
 your talent.

I would really
 grateful if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 with us next
 year, we will create This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 memories together there, As I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 you, it is better to book the

tickets in advance.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing from you

Best wishes

Possible spelling mistake found.Alfreda
Alireza