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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take RQGo
Dear landlord, My name is Tony and I live in unit 4, 13 Stapleton Street, Wentworthville. I am writing this letter to you in regard of furniture not working properly. I moved in this property two days before and I was surprised to see that the main door, the backyard window and the air conditioner of living room were not working. As the main door and the backyard window are not closing properly therefore, many insects and animals enter in the house as a result we do not feel safe. Secondly, as you know this is summer and air-conditioner is not working so it is inconvenient for us to live in this hot weather. So I would like to request you please resolve these issues and send a carpenter and a technician to our home to fix these issues as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Tony
Dear landlord,

My name is Tony and I
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live
in unit 4, 13
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Stapleton
Street,
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Wentworthville
. I am writing this letter to you in regard of furniture not working
properly
.

I
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moved
in this property two days
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before and
I
was surprised
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that the main door, the backyard window and the air conditioner of living room were not working. As the main door and the backyard window are not closing
properly
therefore
,
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many
insects and animals enter in the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
as a result
we do not feel safe.
Secondly
, as you know this is summer and air-conditioner is not working
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so
it is inconvenient for us to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in this hot weather.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
I would like to request you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
resolve these issues and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
a carpenter and a technician to our home to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
these issues as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
sincerely
,

Tony

IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
152 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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