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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain the important event • apologise for the situation • suggest a new arrangemen

You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain the important event • apologise for the situation • suggest a new arrangemen JREE

Dear Frank, I hope you are doing fine with your studies and taking care of your health. I am writing this letter to inform you that my grandmother suffered a heart attack yesterday, as you know that my parents are not at home at this time, and doctor said that I have to take care of her because her condition is critical due to the weakness. I apologize about this unexpected tragedy, and i have to cancel my visit. I know you are excited to meet me but I cannot change the destiny. I informed my parents, and they are returning from their vacation. I consulted with the doctors, they said, she will recover her health within next two weeks. That means, I can visit you next month instead of this month. I already bought airline tickets and my flight will land on 22nd November. I hope you will understand my situation. Last thing do not forget to bring your Mustang car to pick me from the airport. I wish you good luck. Your best friend, Dilpreet.

Dear Frank,

I hope you are doing fine with your studies and taking care of your health. I am writing this letter to inform you that my grandmother suffered a heart attack yesterday, as you know that my parents are not at home at this time, and doctor said that I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take care of her This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 her condition is critical due to the weakness.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 apologize about this unexpected tragedy, and Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 cancel my visit. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 know you are excited
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 the destiny. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 informed my parents, and they are returning from their vacation.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 consulted with the doctors, they said, she will recover her health within next
 two weeks. That means, I can visit you next
 month instead
 of this month. I already This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 airline tickets and my flight will land on 22nd November. I hope you will understand my situation. Last thing do not forget to bring your Mustang car to pick me from the airport.

I wish you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 luck.

Your best friend,

Possible spelling mistake found.Discreet
Dilpreet
. 