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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain the important event • apologise for the situation • suggest a new arrangemen

You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain the important event • apologise for the situation • suggest a new arrangemen JREE
Dear Frank, I hope you are doing fine with your studies and taking care of your health. I am writing this letter to inform you that my grandmother suffered a heart attack yesterday, as you know that my parents are not at home at this time, and doctor said that I have to take care of her because her condition is critical due to the weakness. I apologize about this unexpected tragedy, and i have to cancel my visit. I know you are excited to meet me but I cannot change the destiny. I informed my parents, and they are returning from their vacation. I consulted with the doctors, they said, she will recover her health within next two weeks. That means, I can visit you next month instead of this month. I already bought airline tickets and my flight will land on 22nd November. I hope you will understand my situation. Last thing do not forget to bring your Mustang car to pick me from the airport. I wish you good luck. Your best friend, Dilpreet.
Dear Frank,

I hope you are doing fine with your studies and taking care of your health. I am writing this letter to inform you that my grandmother suffered a heart attack yesterday, as you know that my parents are not at home at this time, and doctor said that I
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have to
take care of her
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because
her condition is critical due to the weakness.

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I
apologize about this unexpected tragedy, and
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i
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have to
cancel my visit.
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I
know you
are excited
to
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meet
me
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but
I cannot
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change
the destiny.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
informed my parents, and they are returning from their vacation.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
consulted with the doctors, they said, she will recover her health within
next
two weeks. That means, I can visit you
next
month
instead
of this month. I already
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
airline tickets and my flight will land on 22nd November. I hope you will understand my situation. Last thing do not forget to bring your Mustang car to pick me from the airport.

I wish you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
luck.

Your best friend,

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Dilpreet
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IELTS letter You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain the important event • apologise for the situation • suggest a new arrangemen

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  American English
7 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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