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feedback of concert of the singer you attended

feedback of concert of the singer you attended MR6k

Dear Mr. Singh, I am writing this letter to congratulate you on the remarkable performance of your concert which was held in Chandigarh on the 20th of January, 2020. This was your first concert in the city and I was eagerly waiting to attend it. It was the full house I could see people waiting in the queue to get in, the vibes, music, , and songs you sang were amazing and it was totally worth waiting for it. Unfortunately, I didn't get the chance to meet you; I am also learning music and has performed a number of times in my university events and at other places. I would be really grateful if you could help me to provide an opportunity to be a part of your group at your next concert, it will be a great learning experience for me to work with a superstar like you. Hoping for a prompt and positive reply. Yours sincerely Aman

Dear Mr. Singh,

I am writing this letter to congratulate you on the remarkable performance of your concert which was held
 in Chandigarh on the 20th of When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "January 2020".January 2020
January, 2020
.

This was your first
 concert in the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).city, and
city and
 I was eagerly
 waiting to attend it. It was the full This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 I could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 waiting in the queue to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 in, the vibes, music,Two consecutive commas,
 ,
 and songs you sang were amazing and it was totally
 worth waiting for it.

Unfortunately, I didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the chance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you; I am also
 learning music and has performed a number of times in my university This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 and at other places. I would be really
 grateful if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me to provide an opportunity to be a part of your group at your next
 concert, it will be a great learning experience for me to work with a superstar like you.

Hoping for a prompt and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 reply.

Yours sincerely


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