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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter • explain why you are writing • describe your circumstances • ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter • explain why you are writing • describe your circumstances • ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course jgXp
Dear Sir / Madam, I Matangi Dave, working as a manager in KPTL. As a professional person I have to manage work schedule of my assistants. So, I have elementary knowledge of Microsoft project. From advertisement which is published in the local newspaper, I came to know about the advance course of scheduling computer programme running in your institute. As per basic requirement needed to attend this course is that person need to have certification of completion of basic course. But unfortunately, I do not have the certificate even though I have a good command on scheduling software such as primavera and MSP. For inadequate proof of eligibility, I am ready to give a test to prove my knowledge. I am pleased if you arrange accordingly. please understand my case. Waiting for your positive reply. My contact details are: +912315864792. Regards, Matangi Dave
Dear Sir / Madam,

I
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Matangi
Dave, working as a manager in
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KPTL
.
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As
a professional person I
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have to
manage work schedule of my assistants.
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So
, I have elementary knowledge of Microsoft project.

From advertisement which
is published
in the local newspaper, I came to know about the advance course of scheduling computer
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programme
running in your institute.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
per basic requirement needed to attend this course is that person need to have certification of completion of basic course.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
unfortunately, I do not have the certificate
even though
I have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
command on scheduling software such as primavera and
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MSP
.

For inadequate proof of eligibility, I am ready to give a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
to prove my knowledge. I am
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
if you arrange
accordingly
.
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please
understand my case.

Waiting for your
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positive
reply. My contact
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
are: +912315864792.

Regards,

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Matangi
Dave

IELTS letter Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter • explain why you are writing • describe your circumstances • ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course

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7 paragraphs
142 words
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