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Correct the information in the article.explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information.suggest what the magazine should do about this situatio.

Correct the information in the article. explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information. suggest what the magazine should do about this situatio. e027
Dear sir, benI am writing this about your some information about my town is that incorrect. Well i see the magazine the last monday. The magazine name is india today. i see a article about my town. some information was wrong. my town location and name are not correct write. my town name is new muktsar and he is a historical place and great facielties available in this. you write my town name muktsar and new is missing. Please correct the mistake and proper name new muktsar written. Yes i will thankful to you please correct the information about my town. i will gave you some correct information of my town. your collect information is wrong. you write article in india today magazine about my town. my town name correct new muktsar. He is a most famous and historical place. you are very low quality information about my town. i dont agree with your article. my town standard is not down. so please i gave a correct information to new article of your india today magazine. Your magazine re prepare a new article and apologies for mistake and re create a new article of my town. your magazine is a international magazine. all over the world see it. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerly, martin
Dear sir,
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benI
Did you mean "am I"?
am
writing this about your
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some
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information
about my
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town
is that incorrect. Well
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
the
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magazine
the last
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monday
. The
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magazine
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
name
is
Possible spelling mistake found.
india
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
article
about my
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town
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
some
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information
was
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wrong
.
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my
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town
location and
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name
are not
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correct
write.
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my
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town
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name
is
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new
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
muktsar and
he is a historical place and great
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facielties
available in this.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
you
write my
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town
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
name
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muktsar
and
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new
is missing.
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Please
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correct
the mistake and proper
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name
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new
Possible spelling mistake found.
muktsar
written. Yes
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
will thankful to you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
correct
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
about my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
.
Did you mean "I"?
i
will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "give"
gave
you
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some
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correct
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
your
collect
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information
is
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wrong
.
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you
write
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article
in
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india
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today
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magazine
about my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
.
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my
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town
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
name
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correct
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
Possible spelling mistake found.
muktsar
. He is a most
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famous
and historical place.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
you
are
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very
low quality
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information
about my
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town
.
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i
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dont
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agree
with your
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article
.
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my
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town
standard is not down.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
so
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please
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
gave a
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correct
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information
to
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new
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article
of your
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india
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
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magazine
. Your
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magazine
re prepare a
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new
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article
and apologies for mistake and re create a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
article
of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
town
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
your
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magazine
is
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
international
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magazine
.
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all
over the world
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see
it. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours
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sincerly
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
martin
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IELTS letter Correct the information in the article. explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information. suggest what the magazine should do about this situatio.

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  American English
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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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