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You are writing a letter to invite your friends family party

You are writing a letter to invite your friends family party 3LpjY

Dear JohnHow are you? I am writing a letter to invite you my son' birthday party on 27 of October. He will be ten year old on this day. I invite all my close friends to this celebration and all my relative are coming to this celebration. I am very glad if you come to this party. First of all I have planned everything. I invite skillful cook to prepare the dishes and he cooks various national dishes I believe he can cook meals very well. Second I take popular singers to this ceremony, they are Jack, Tonny. One thing I should tell you you should bring your guitar and prepare a nice song, when we were young, Everyone liked your voice. I think It will be music party everybody dance and sing songs. I hope you will come this ceremony. We talk and remember our young events. All friends are coming. If you come to this celebration. Call my new phone number 998979876654. I think you can not find my new house because the city has changed in a few years. I send you a car take my house. Best wishedOleg.

Dear A comma should precede the tag question (i.e., the yes/no-question at the end).JohnHow,
JohnHow
 are you? I am writing a letter to invite you my son' birthday party on 27 of October. He will be ten year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 on this day. I invite all my close friends to this celebration and all my relative are coming to this celebration. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 glad if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to this party. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
 I have planned everything. I invite skillful cook to prepare the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).dishes, and
dishes and
 he cooks various national dishes I believe he can cook meals This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. Second I take popular singers to this ceremony, they are Jack, Possible spelling mistake found.TonySonnyDonnyRonnyTinnyTunny
Tonny
. One thing I should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
Possible typo: you repeated a wordyou
you you
 should bring your guitar and prepare a nice song, when we were young, Everyone liked your voice. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 It will be music party everybody The pronoun 'everybody' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "dances", "danced".dancesdanced
dance
 and sing songs. I hope you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 this ceremony. We talk and remember our young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
. All friends are coming. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to this celebration. Call my new phone number 998979876654. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 you can not find my new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the city has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 in a few years. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 you a car take my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Best Possible spelling mistake found.
wishedOleg
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