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Dear sir or madam I am writing to apply for the course on improving my english which I saw advertised on bill board on 8 th of JulyCurrently, I am preparing for entering the university in the sphere of english teacher. Furthmore, I have been attending english course for several months. I find to write english essay very difficult. Since I have problems on writing essay. I would like to enroll on your course in order to strengthen my essay. I have heard about visualasition and association techniques but I do not now how to use this methods effictively. Moreover I would like to now more about writing techniques. Besides I want to know about fee and course datesAs I am preparing for the entrance exams. I have a little time for the course so it would better if you offer flexble hours to me I look forward to receiving your response in the near future Yours faithfully Lucy
Dear sir or madam I am writing to apply for the
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course
on improving my
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english
which I
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saw
advertised on bill board on
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8 th
of
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JulyCurrently
, I am preparing for entering the university in the sphere of
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english
teacher.
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Furthmore
, I have been attending
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english
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course
for several months. I find to write
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english
essay
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very
difficult.
“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
I have problems on writing essay. I would like to enroll on your
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course
in order to strengthen my essay. I have heard about
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visualasition
and association techniques
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but
I do not
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now
how to
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use
Did you mean "these"?
this
methods
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effictively
.
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Moreover
I would like to
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now
more about writing techniques.
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Besides
I want to know about fee and
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course
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datesAs
I am preparing for the entrance exams. I have a
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little
time for the
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course
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so
it would
Did you mean "be better"?
better
if you offer
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flexble
hours to me I look forward to receiving your response in the near future Yours
faithfully
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Lucy
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IELTS letter Aplication letter writing letter aplication

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
158 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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