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Write a complain about a sales person.

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Dear Sir / Madam, I would like to make a complaint about the service I received while I was shopping at your hypermarket yesterday afternoon. I wanted to buy a perfume for my wife, so I went straight to the perfume counter on the first floor. The assistant was busy when I arrived, so I went to another department and returned later. She was still talking to a customer. I came back six times before she finally served me. I suspect the ‘customer’ was her friend. Sadly, when I was finally served, your assistant (Miss. Padma) proved to be both clumsy and rude. When I was leaning over the counter examining a bottle of perfume she spilt a large quantity of scent on my arm. Consequently, I smelt very strong of ‘Spring Flowers’ perfume all afternoon. As I am an Engineer this was most embarrassing. When I pointed this out to her, however, she laughed. I look forward to hearing your response to this disgraceful incident. Yours faithfully, Engineer Dias

Dear Sir / Madam,

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make
 a complaint about the service I received while I was shopping at your hypermarket yesterday afternoon.

I wanted to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoilbouquetodorincensearomasmell
perfume
 for my wife, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I went straight to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoilbouquetodorincensearomasmell
perfume
 counter on the first
 floor. The assistant was busy when I arrived, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I went to another department and returned later. She was still
 talking to a customer. I came back six times This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 she finally
 served me. I suspect the ‘customer’ was her friend.

Sadly
, when I was finally
 served, your assistant (Miss. Possible spelling mistake found.Pad maPalmaParma
Padma
) proved to be both clumsy and rude. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 I was leaning over the counter examining a bottle of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoilbouquetodorincensearomasmell
perfume
 she Possible spelling mistake. 'spilt' is British English.spilled
spilt
 a large quantity of scent on my arm. Consequently
, I smelt This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 strong of ‘Spring Flowers’ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoilbouquetodorincensearomasmell
perfume
 all afternoon. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 I am an Engineer this was most embarrassing. When I pointed this out to her, however
, she laughed.

I look forward to hearing your response to this disgraceful incident.

Yours faithfully
,

Engineer Dias