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When it arrived you found that one of the doorswas missing.

When it arrived you found that one of the doorswas missing. yDpyl

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the wardrobe that I recently bought. For the past 3 years, I have been purchasing and using your wardrobe products and I have been satisfied with the results. However, I recently received the wardrobe manufactured by your company. This letter is to complain about the unsatisfactory service upon the delivery of the product, I found that it was damaged. It was missing one of the doors not. I would feast this very bad. I was expecting a higher level of service from your company and I am really disappointed with how things turned out. This is why I am returning the wardrobe for full refund. I have been using many of your products in the past without any trouble. I hope to continue to have a good relationship with your company. I look forward to hearing from you with a resolution to this problem. Your faithfully.

I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappareldressertrunkclosetattire
wardrobe
 that I recently This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
. For the past 3 years, I have been purchasing and using your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappareldressertrunkclosetattire
wardrobe
 products and I have been satisfied
 with the results. However
, I recently received the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappareldressertrunkclosetattire
wardrobe
 manufactured by your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. This letter is to complain about the unsatisfactory service upon the delivery of the product, I found that it was damaged
. It was missing one of the doors not. I would feast this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
. I was expecting a higher level of service from your Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).company, and
company and
 I am really
 disappointed with how things turned out. This is why I am returning the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withappareldressertrunkclosetattire
wardrobe
 for full refund. I have been using This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of your products in the past without any trouble. I hope to continue to have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 relationship with your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 look forward to hearing from you with a resolution to this problem. Your faithfully
. 