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You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: • Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight • Explain how missing your flight impacted you • Clearly state what you would like the airline to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: • Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight • Explain how missing your flight impacted you • Clearly state what you would like the airline to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, bVGQ
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I recently lost my digital camera while on holiday in Vietnam. The camera is a black Canon 70d and cost $1550 when I bought it new last month. It has a resolution of 20 megapixels, a Canon 67 millimeter lens and was in a brown leather case with my name on it. I lost it when I was having coffee with my wife in the backpacker area of Ho Chi Minh City. I believe the coffee shop was called Highlands Coffee and it was on Pham Ngu Lao Street. We had been at the coffee shop for around 45 minutes when I noticed it was missing. I am entitled to make a claim for the value of the above mentioned item and request that you send me details on what I need to do to in order to proceed. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, (Mr. ) Adam Smith
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I recently lost my digital camera while on holiday in Vietnam.

The camera is a black Canon 70d and cost $1550 when I
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bought
it new last month. It has a resolution of 20

megapixels, a Canon 67 millimeter lens and was in a brown leather case with my name on it.

I lost it when I was having coffee with my wife in the backpacker area of Ho Chi Minh City. I believe the coffee

shop
was called
Highlands Coffee and it was on
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Pham
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Ngu
Lao Street. We had been at the coffee shop for

around 45 minutes when I noticed it was missing.

I
am entitled
to
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make
a claim for the value of the above mentioned item and request that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
me
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details
on

what I need to do to in order to proceed.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

(Mr.
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)
Adam Smith
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IELTS letter You missed an international flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: • Describe what happened that caused you to miss your flight • Explain how missing your flight impacted you • Clearly state what you would like the airline to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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