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You are working for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should: • describe why you want to take the course • explaining how it will be beneficial to the company • tell who will be managing your work in your absence.

Dear Mr. Sharma, I am writing this letter to request for the permission to attend me a training program for one week. My name is Amandeep working in Sales department as a Team Head. It will start from 12th of January, 2021 to 18th of January, 2021 The course is about to groom your soft skills, I find this to very beneficaial to me as it will be helpful to improve my performance and even I will learn new skills. On the company point of view, it will be advantageous as I will implement these skills in my work and my team will learn from me. In my absence my team will look towards my duties and responsibilities, I have informed them for the same and also delegated my work so that they properly manage it. Looking forward to hearing a positive response. Yours Sincerely Xyz
Dear Mr. Sharma,

I am writing this letter to request for the permission to attend me a training program for one week. My name is Amandeep working in Sales department as a Team Head. It will
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start
from 12th of
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January, 2021
to 18th of
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January, 2021


The course is about to groom your soft
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skills
, I find this to
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very
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beneficaial
to me as it will be helpful to
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improve
my performance and even I will learn new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. On the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
point of view, it will be advantageous as I will implement these
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
in my work and my team will learn from me.

In my absence my team will look towards my duties and responsibilities, I have informed them for the same and
also
delegated my work
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so
that they
properly
manage it.

Looking forward to hearing a
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positive
response.

Yours
Sincerely


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Xyz
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IELTS letter You are working for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, you should: • describe why you want to take the course • explaining how it will be beneficial to the company • tell who will be managing your work in your absence.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
145 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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