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Writer a letter telling your friend about your good news.What is it.Why does it effects your life.Invite him /her over for celebration.

Dear Raman, Hope this letter you in radiant Heath and the best of spirits. I M writing this letter to give you the good news that I have got job in London “desire Mapping”company with the high pay scale. I would like to celebrate this good new with you as your my close friend. You know I was dream I want to do jon in London as it is superb beautiful city. Besides that, Desire mapping is big company in whole world. I had been tried for getting job in this company since five years. But on the 27th March, I got email regarding job. Really, I felt happy. This is big opportunity for my betterment life. As there are eight hundred employees are working. Moreover, There are weather also nice. I will be leaving next month, but before going I would like to together with friends. Thus I did arrange party on 17 March at home. The party would be incomplete without your presence. I hope you will reach at time. Your lovingly, Ram

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Raman
, Hope this letter you in radiant Heath and the best of spirits. I M writing this letter to give you the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 news that I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 job in London “desire Mapping”This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 with the high pay scale. I would like to celebrate this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 new with you as your my close friend. You know I was dream I want to do Possible spelling mistake found.JononwonnonsonJohn
jon
 in London as it is superb This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 city. Besides
 that, Desire mapping is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 in whole world. I had been tried
 for getting job in this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
Did you mean "for"? ('since' refers to a point in time, whereas 'for' refers to a period)for
since
 five years. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 on the 27th March, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 email regarding job. Really
, I felt happy. This is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 opportunity for my betterment life. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 there are eight hundred employees are working. Moreover
, There are weather also
 nice. I will be leaving next
 month, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 going I would like to together with friends. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Thus,
Thus
 I did arrange party on 17 March at home. The party would be incomplete without your presence. I hope you will reach at time. Your lovingly
, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphRam.Ram!Ram?Ram:Ram,Ram;
Ram