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You are working for a company which offers an all-expense-paid trip for its employees and you want to avail yourself of it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, explain to him why you want it share your plans regarding the same mention how your work will be taken care of in your absence

You are working for a company which offers an all-expense-paid trip for its employees and you want to avail yourself of it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, explain to him why you want it share your plans regarding the same mention how your work will be taken care of in your absence APp03
Dear Mr smith, I am writing to inquire you about the all-expense-paid travel that your company offers to employees. As you know I have been working here for a long time and since I have started my work I could not go to the vacation. Now this option that you have donated to us is one of the best opportunities for me to go somewhere. Moreover, I need to this trip to evaquate my tiredness. I am sure that after this trip I can work for you better that last. In addition as you know my family are living in London and since this trip's distenation is London I have a chance to see my family there. I have done most of my duties in advance and one of my colleague who works exactly same my position commite to handle my job when I am far away the work. I look forward your respons and thank you in anticiption. yours sincerely, Maedeh Abolghasemi
Dear Mr smith,

I am writing to inquire you about the all-expense-paid travel that your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
offers to employees.

As you know I have been working here for a long time and since I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
my work I could not go to the vacation.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
this option that you have donated to us is one of the best opportunities for me to go somewhere.
Moreover
, I need to this trip to
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evaquate
my tiredness.

I am sure that after this trip I can work for you better that last. In
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addition
as you know my family are living in London and since this trip's
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distenation
is London I have a chance to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
my family there.

I have done most of my duties in advance and one of my colleague who works exactly same my position
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commite
to handle my job when I am far away the work.

I look forward your
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respons
and thank you in
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anticiption
.

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yours
sincerely
,

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Maedeh
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Abolghasemi
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IELTS letter You are working for a company which offers an all-expense-paid trip for its employees and you want to avail yourself of it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, explain to him why you want it share your plans regarding the same mention how your work will be taken care of in your absence

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