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Hello, good day. I submitted an application to the Online Chinese Language Program offered by Beijing Chinese Language and Culture College (BLCC) 2 weeks ago and I still haven’t gotten a response yet. The application deadline is in less than 2 weeks, on the 29th of August, and the course immediately starts the next day. I would really appreciate it if I can get a follow up message, so that I’ll know if I should look for another university to apply to in case I don’t get accepted. Also, my application ID is C46E093A. Thank you so much for your time and help. Good bless.
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day. I submitted an application to the Online Chinese Language Program offered by Beijing Chinese Language and Culture College (
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BLCC
) 2 weeks ago and I
still
haven’t gotten a response
yet
. The application deadline is in less than 2 weeks, on the 29th of August, and the course immediately
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the
next
day. I would
really
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a
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follow up
message,
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so
that I’ll know if I should look for another university to apply to in case I don’t
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get
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accepted
.
Also
, my application ID is C46E093A. Thank you
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much for your time and
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help
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bless.
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IELTS letter Ask about the status of your online course application

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1 paragraphs
105 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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