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Dear Miss Garcia I am writing to enquire about taking lrussion lessons with you .

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Dear Miss Garcia I am writing to enquireabout taking russion lessons with you. I read the article about you and your advert in this week's local paper and I believe that you are just the person I am looking for. My best freind Ann giving advice: , , you should learn russion from teacher Miss Garcia". I am particulary keen to learn from native speaker like yourself so, I do hope that you have space in your timetable to fit me in for some lessons. I and my family have been living in Moscva for a month. In my family my mother, my father and my brother know russion, but I do not know russion. So I must learn russion. My reason for wanting to learn your language is because I will be travelling to Russia. I would be greatful if you could let me know what availability you havefor lessons. Twice a week would be ideal if that is possible. Please, could you also tell me what you charge for tuition and how long each lesson would last I look forward to hearing from you soon. Kind regards. Jessica Johnson

Dear Miss Garcia

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I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
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Kind regards.

Jessica Johnson