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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter your manager. In your letter Explain why you want to take time off work Give detail of the amount of time you need Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter your manager. In your letter Explain why you want to take time off work Give detail of the amount of time you need Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away l0Vo
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to inform you that I want to take some time off from work as I have to attend 3 days international business conference which is going to take place in Islamabad. Last month, I registered myself for this conference to gain new insights on different ways of doing business and how the recent evolution of Fin-tech can help the business to achieve strategic goals. As a result, to be part of this conference I have to take some days off from the work. The conference will be held from 15th May 2020 to 18th May 2020 but as I will be travelling by road which takes more time than flights so I need to take 5 days of work leaves from 14th May 2020 to 19th May 2020 both days inclusive. Moreover, I understand the significance of on-going projects and how important it is to fulfil them on deadline. Hence, to make sure every task is per schedule I have delegated responsibilities to our Deputy Head of Research Anjlee. In my absence she will be looking after them and should you have any query please contact her. Yours faithfully, Jay
Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to inform you that I want to take
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some
time off from work as I
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have to
attend 3 days international business
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conference
which is going to take place in Islamabad.

Last month, I registered myself for this
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conference
to gain new insights on
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
ways of doing business and how the recent evolution of Fin-tech can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the business to achieve strategic goals.
As a result
, to be part of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
conference
I
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have to
take
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some
days off from the work.

The
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conference
will
be held
from 15th May 2020 to 18th May 2020
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but
as I will be travelling by road which takes more time than flights
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so
I need to take 5 days of work
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leaves
from 14th May 2020 to 19th May 2020 both days inclusive.

Moreover
, I understand the significance of
Did you mean "ongoing"?
on-going
projects and how
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important
it is to fulfil them on deadline.
Hence
, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure every task is per schedule I have delegated responsibilities to our Deputy Head of Research
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Anjlee
. In my absence she will be looking after them and should you have any query
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please
contact her.

Yours
faithfully
,

Jay

IELTS letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter your manager. In your letter Explain why you want to take time off work Give detail of the amount of time you need Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

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7 paragraphs
195 words
6.0
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