Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask you manager about this. write a letter to your manager . #explain why you want to take time off work #give details of the amountof time you need #suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask you manager about this. write a letter to your manager. #explain why you want to take time off work #give details of the amountof time you need #suggest how your work could be covered while you are away j7Gy
Dear sir, I hope you and your family is doing well. As you know I employed in your company as accountant since last 5 years. In this year specially last 3 months were very hectic for me because of tax filling. My schedule was up to neck, even I did not take any day off from work in peak season. However, now I am facing some health issues and my doctor suggest me take rest for few days. My family decided to visit any hill station to refresh mind. So, I need your permission to take a week off from work. It will be good for my health moreover, I will pay more attention to work after vocations. I have done my work already if anything left behind my assistant accountant will take care of that as I already taught most of stuff. consequensely you do not need to worry about my work. Yours faithfully John
Dear sir,

I hope you and your family is doing well. As you know I employed in your
company
as accountant since last 5 years. In this year
specially
last 3 months were
very
hectic for me
because
of tax filling. My schedule was up to neck, even I did not take any day off from
work
in peak season.
However
,
now
I am facing
some
health issues and my doctor suggest me take rest for few days.

My family decided to visit any hill station to refresh mind.
So
, I need your permission to take a week off from
work
. It will be
good
for my health
moreover
, I will pay more attention to
work
after vocations.

I have done my
work
already if anything
left
behind my assistant accountant will take care of that as I already taught
most of stuff
.
consequensely
you do not need to worry about my work.

Yours
faithfully


John
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask you manager about this. write a letter to your manager. #explain why you want to take time off work #give details of the amountof time you need #suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts