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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to show my annoyance regarding the order I placed two days back.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to show my annoyance regarding the order I placed two days back. 9nWX
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to show my annoyance regarding the order I placed two days back. This order was of medicines which I required urgently for my uncle’s asthma problem. Undoubtedly, this delivery was crucial for me. Before placing the order, I got the confirmation from your pharmacy care department that medicines will be delivered on next day in any circumstances if I opt the premier services. Those medicines were required by me immediately because uncle was in my city for two days, but, unfortunately, I received the courier two days later even after the prior intimation. Due to late delivery, I could not receive my order timely and my uncle left the city which was already planned due to some urgent work. I personally request you to take necessary action against the poor service. I look forward to receive your response at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Dev
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you to
show
my annoyance regarding the
order
I placed two days back. This
order
was of medicines which I required
urgently
for my uncle’s asthma problem.

Undoubtedly
, this delivery was crucial for me.
Before
placing the
order
, I
got
the confirmation from your pharmacy care department that medicines will
be delivered
on
next
day in any circumstances if I opt the premier services. Those medicines
were required
by me immediately
because
uncle was in my city for two days,
but
, unfortunately, I received the courier two days later even after the prior intimation.

Due to late delivery, I could not receive my
order
timely and my uncle
left
the city which was already planned due to
some
urgent work.

I
personally
request you to take necessary action against the poor service.

I look forward
to receive
your response at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

Dev
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IELTS letter Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to show my annoyance regarding the order I placed two days back.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
151 words
6.5
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