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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. 2nqJ

Dear Carlos, How are you doing? I hope you were great. As we were messaging before, I will be traveling to Italy for vacations 3 weeks and I will need some help caring with bobby, my dog, and some other home subjects. I am starting with bobbys' needing and then I will describe you some of the home duties you must do whereas I am outside. First of all, Bobby has a strict and balanced diet, based on some meet and vegetable, high in protein to grow his shining hair, this is why you have to serve him 1 fist of meet and 3 cups of cereals three times per day. Also he will need to take a shower once per week. For the rest, he is in most a independent dog, and he knows how to go to the backyard to his other needings, just be sure to let the backyard door open. In second place, there are three plants you have to hydratate in the mornings, preferably before 9 A. M. and let them near the window, where the sun give them some light. Done that you will be finished with the home duties. If you require something, please call me to 112345678 or just message me in Whatsapp, otherwise you can reply to this mail every time you need. Thank you to agree to help me. I know you will do it amazing. Regarts, Axel

Dear Carlos,

How are you doing? I hope you were great.

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, I will be traveling to Italy for vacations 3 weeks and I will need This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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help
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some
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other
 home subjects.

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bobbys
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describe
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some of the
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must
 do whereas I am outside.

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some
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have to
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Also
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needings
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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let
 the backyard door open.

In second place, there are three plants you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
Possible spelling mistake found.hydrate
hydratate
 in the mornings, preferably
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before
 9 A. M. and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 them near the window, where the sun give them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 light. Done that you will be finished
 with the home duties.

If you require something, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 call me to 112345678 or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 message me in Possible spelling mistake found.WhatsAppWhats app
Whatsapp
, otherwise
 you can reply to this mail every time you need.

Thank you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me. I know you will do it amazing.

Possible spelling mistake found.RegardsReg arts
Regarts
,

Axel