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Write a letter to a professional photographer saying you liked the photos of your family members taken by him and would like him to take pictures of another event in the family. li

Write a letter to a professional photographer saying you liked the photos of your family members taken by him and would like him to take pictures of another event in the family. li L0PK

Dear Jacob, I am writing this letter in regard to appreciate you for your photography work. Recently, I attended the Roka ceremony of my cousin and was amazed by the pictures you took of the ceremony and of people in my family. The photos were candid and had a story of its own. I also liked how you cleverly used the background in your own advantage. Fortunately, on 6th of next month, there is another function in my family for which i aim to book you in advance. My parents are celebrating their 25th wedding anniversary with close relatives and family friends. It's going to be a close-nit family affair in a sea facing resort in Goa. I want to make this occasion more memorable for them by including your photographic skills and capture the moments. I would like to know in advance whether you'll be able to confirm the booking or not and also would like to explore few more budding ideas with you. Kindly, let me know if there is going to be any other requisite necessities for this booking so that i can prepare them well in advance. I hope to get an update regarding the booking confirmation by the end of this week with a positive response. Yours Faithfully, Sara Batra

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 friends. It's going to be a close-nit You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
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 and capture the moments.

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 would like to explore few more budding This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
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let
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so
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 can prepare them well in advance.

I hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 an update regarding the booking confirmation by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this week with a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response. Yours Faithfully
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