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Dear Sarah I hope this letter finds you in good health.

Dear Sarah I hope this letter finds you in good health. XYLr
Dear Sarah I hope this letter finds you in good health. I’m obliged to you for offering me the job opportunity in your company. I have known your company for decades and have heard of the great projects your company has recently completed. However, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to join the organization at the agreed date. Currently, I am working on a three month’s project with Infotech Solutions that I want to finish to add to my portfolio before I make a switch. Also, this is a very demanding and challenging customer and as a result, I can’t put the burden of the project on the other team members since I was involved in it from the beginning. If there is no urgency to fill this post, then I request you to consider my application for this post after 3 months. I hope you understand my situation. Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Devinder
Dear Sarah

I hope this letter finds you in
good
health. I’m obliged to you for offering me the job opportunity in your
company
. I have known your
company
for decades and have heard of the great projects your
company
has recently completed.

However
, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to
join
the organization at the
agreed
date.
Currently
, I am working on a
three month’s project
with
Infotech
Solutions that I want to finish to
add
to my portfolio
before
I
make
a switch.
Also
, this is a
very
demanding and challenging customer and
as a result
, I can’t put the burden of the project on the other team members since I
was involved
in it from the beginning.

If there is no urgency to fill this post, then I request you to consider my application for this post after 3 months. I hope you understand my situation.

Hope to hear from you
soon
.

Best wishes,

Devinder
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IELTS letter Dear Sarah I hope this letter finds you in good health.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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