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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give reasons for wanting the job

You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give reasons for wanting the job Nrw3b
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in reference to the advertisement you have posted recently. I believe that I am a great fit to teachTHE Polish language to your children. Let me briefly introduce myself. My name is Natalia, and I am not only A native Polish speaker but also A certified Polish teacher. I am living in Singapore which is in a much closer time zone to Australia than Poland. Your children could easily incorporate our online classes to their current schedules for this year. In my opinion, THE combination of my location and my profession makes me more suitable for the job in comparison to the other candidates. If you would be interested, I could also provide classes about Polish culture and history in English. I do not have many opportunities to teach anymore here in Singapore. Therefore, I would love to take on a new challenge with yoR children. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Natalia Gasowska
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you in reference to the advertisement you have posted recently. I believe that I am a great fit to
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teachTHE
Polish language to your children.

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Let
me
briefly
introduce myself. My name is Natalia, and I am not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
A native Polish speaker
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but
also
A certified Polish teacher. I am living in Singapore which is in a much closer time zone to Australia than Poland. Your children could
easily
incorporate our online classes to their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
schedules for this year.

In my opinion, THE combination of my location and my profession
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me more suitable for the job
in comparison
to the other candidates. If you would
be interested
, I could
also
provide classes about Polish culture and history in English. I do not have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
opportunities to teach
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anymore
here in Singapore.
Therefore
, I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to take on a new challenge with
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yoR
children.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours
faithfully
,

Natalia
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Gasowska

IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job say what else you could do for the family give reasons for wanting the job

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  American English
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166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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