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You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to explain why you want to take time give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to explain why you want to take time give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away 3e25
Hello Andrew, I am writing to request you to grant me a leave of absence for 2 days. As you know, the customer was extremely disappointed with our previous delivery as their expectation regarding quality and the timeline of the release was too high. To meet their requirement, I had been working consecutively for 3 weeks even on the weekends. Now, considering the number of hours I spent in the office last month, I have decided to take a short break from work. I am planning a short vacation on November 21st and 22nd. As the following days are weekends, I will get a total of 4 days of holiday. I would like to visit my native place during these holidays and get some time for myself before commencing work on the next project. I assure you that my absence will in no way affect my work as my teammate Sara has agreed to fill me for me. In addition, I will continuously monitor my email inbox and reply to customer queries without delay. I look forward to getting my leave application approved as early as possible. Yours sincerely
Hello Andrew,

I am writing to request you to grant me a
leave
of absence for 2 days. As you know, the customer was
extremely
disappointed with our previous delivery as their expectation regarding quality and the timeline of the release was too high. To
meet
their requirement, I had been working
consecutively
for 3 weeks even on the weekends.
Now
, considering the number of hours I spent in the office last month, I have decided to take a short break from work.

I am planning a short vacation on November 21st and 22nd. As the following days are weekends, I will
get
a total of 4 days of holiday. I would like to visit my native place during these holidays and
get
some
time for myself
before
commencing work on the
next
project.

I assure you that my absence will in no way affect my work as my teammate Sara has
agreed
to fill me for me.
In addition
, I will
continuously
monitor my email inbox and reply to customer queries without delay.

I look forward to getting my
leave
application approved as early as possible.

Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to explain why you want to take time give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter explain why you want to take time give details of the amount of time you need suggest how your work could be covered while you are away

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
188 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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