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You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment.You left the apartment in good condition but landlord wonot return your deposit #explain why your writing #ask for the return #inform the landlord of possible legal action.

You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an apartment. You left the apartment in good condition but landlord wonot return your deposit #explain why your writing #ask for the return #inform the landlord of possible legal action. 2eo6

Dear Jason, Hope you and your family doing well. I am John and I rented an apartment from you two years later as per lease I left an apartment two month ago. I am writing this letter to let you know about the refundable rent that I deposited when you gave that apartment to me and said you will refund me back whenever I will leave the apartment but in condition. Actually, I am waiting for that return from last two months, but you did not send me money in my account I thought maybe you forgot about that refund. so, I want to remind you. I really request you to return my money back as earliest as you can otherwise, I have to approach to legal authorities as I have all document that you gave me during lease, and I took some picture and video's when I left from apartment. we had good relation with each other so I really don't want to take this step so, pleased do not force me to do so. Your sincerely, John

Dear Jason,

Hope you and your family doing well. I am John and I rented an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 from you two years later as per lease I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 two Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: "months".months
month
 ago. I am writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know about the refundable rent that I deposited when you gave that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 to me and said you will refund me back whenever I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in condition.

Actually, I am waiting for that return from last two months, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 you did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me money in my account I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 maybe you forgot about that refund. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
, I want to remind you.

I really
 request you to return my money back as Did you mean "early"?early
earliest
 as you can otherwise
, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 approach to legal authorities as I have all document that you gave me during lease, and I took This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 picture and Consider using the plural form here: "videos".videos
video's
 when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 relation with each other This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I really
 don't want to take this step This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleased
 do not force me to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
,

John