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Letter to new paper editor for mistake in an article

Letter to new paper editor for mistake in an article w96N
Dear Sir, I'm writing in connection to a discrepency observed in a recently published article in your newspaper "Daily Life". I have been a great admirer of your newspaper and especially a regular reader of the editorial column since the last five years. There are a lot of informative articles published on this tabloid, which help create awareness in general public. Many of my family members also read the newspaper reguarly and stay up to date. Notably, there was incorrect piece of information observed in the article "Hollywood Actors" published on 25 February 2021. The year of birth of Jackie Chan was mentioned as 1976, and not 1967. The validated year of birth is 1976 actually. It could a wrong source of information or an overlook during proof reading. I urge you to check the quality process and check for areas of improvement. This can be avoided in future if the source of information is authentic, and also proof reading is done by multiple persons independently. I kook forward to your reply and corrective action. Yours faithfully, Rajesh Thakkar
Dear Sir,

I'm writing in connection to a
discrepency
observed in a recently published article in your newspaper
"
Daily Life
"
.

I have been a great admirer of your newspaper and
especially
a regular reader of the editorial column since the last five years. There are
a lot of
informative articles published on this tabloid, which
help
create awareness in
general public
.
Many
of my family members
also
read the newspaper
reguarly
and stay up to date.

Notably
, there was incorrect piece of information observed in the article
"
Hollywood Actors
"
published on 25 February 2021. The year of birth of Jackie Chan
was mentioned
as 1976, and not 1967. The validated year of birth is 1976 actually. It could a
wrong
source of information or an overlook during
proof reading
.

I urge you to
check
the quality process and
check
for areas of improvement. This can
be avoided
in future if the source of information is authentic, and
also
proof reading
is done
by multiple persons
independently
.

I kook
forward to your reply and corrective action.

Yours
faithfully
,

Rajesh
Thakkar
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IELTS letter Letter to new paper editor for mistake in an article

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
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