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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract. jMNy
Dear Mr. Thompson, I am Tom Ollivere, living in park apartments. My apartment number is 15. I am writing in reference to the apartment where I am currently residing. As per my contract, I am supposed to stay there for 1 year but because of sudden emergency, I cannot stay for last two months. I am having a pleasurable experience here. Neighbours and surroundings are very pleasant. Perhaps it would be really helpful, if you can allow me to leave that flat two months early. I am really sorry for my conduct. I know it is not a professional trait to breach the contract but my cousin just came from overseas. He is all alone in this new country. That is the reason I have to move with him to guide him and to give him moral support. Please let me know, if I can compensate in anyway and do reply at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Tom Ollivere
Dear Mr. Thompson,

I am Tom
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Ollivere
, living in park apartments. My apartment number is 15. I am writing in reference to the apartment where I am
currently
residing. As per my contract, I
am supposed
to stay there for 1 year
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but
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because
of sudden emergency, I cannot stay for last two months.

I am having a pleasurable experience here.
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Neighbours
and surroundings are
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very
pleasant. Perhaps it would be
really
helpful, if you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allow
me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
that flat two months early. I am
really
sorry for my conduct.

I know it is not a professional trait to breach the contract
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but
my cousin
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just
came from overseas. He is all alone in this new country.
That is
the reason I
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have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
with him to guide him and to give him moral support.

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Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know
If " if" starts an indirect question, you do not need to put a comma before it.
, if
I can compensate
Did you mean "in any way"?
in anyway
and do reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

Tom
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Ollivere

IELTS letter You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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