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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract. jMNy
Dear Mr. Thompson, I am Tom Ollivere, living in park apartments. My apartment number is 15. I am writing in reference to the apartment where I am currently residing. As per my contract, I am supposed to stay there for 1 year but because of sudden emergency, I cannot stay for last two months. I am having a pleasurable experience here. Neighbours and surroundings are very pleasant. Perhaps it would be really helpful, if you can allow me to leave that flat two months early. I am really sorry for my conduct. I know it is not a professional trait to breach the contract but my cousin just came from overseas. He is all alone in this new country. That is the reason I have to move with him to guide him and to give him moral support. Please let me know, if I can compensate in anyway and do reply at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Tom Ollivere
Dear Mr. Thompson,

I am Tom
Ollivere
, living in park apartments. My apartment number is 15. I am writing in reference to the apartment where I am
currently
residing. As per my contract, I
am supposed
to stay there for 1 year
but
because
of sudden emergency, I cannot stay for last two months.

I am having a pleasurable experience here.
Neighbours
and surroundings are
very
pleasant. Perhaps it would be
really
helpful, if you can
allow
me to
leave
that flat two months early. I am
really
sorry for my conduct.

I know it is not a professional trait to breach the contract
but
my cousin
just
came from overseas. He is all alone in this new country.
That is
the reason I
have to
move
with him to guide him and to give him moral support.

Please
let
me know
, if
I can compensate
in anyway
and do reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

Tom
Ollivere
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IELTS letter You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

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  American English
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158 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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