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Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities, in order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian in your letter describe what you like about the library, say what you don’t like, make suggestions for improvement

Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities, in order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian in your letter describe what you like about the library, say what you don’t like, make suggestions for improvement kVln

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my opinion about the library services and give some opinions. I have been using the library for 5 years, however, what I find pleasurable about the library is the 24 hours opening of the study center which enables we the working people to have access at our off work time. Although, i would express my dislike on the unsafe locker rooms. A few times my money went missing from my bag which left me with no choice than to always come to the library with just my study materials. Furthermore, improvements on the security would be a good input to the library. It can be employments of security agents or installing cctv cameras at important rooms of the study center, this would increase the trust of users and enable them come with a few personal belongings like their wallets and phones. I hope my suggestions would be looked into Yours faithfully.

Dear Sir or Madam,

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some
 opinions.

I have been using the library for 5 years, however
, what I find pleasurable about the library is the 24 hours opening of the study center which enables we the working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to have access at our off work time.

“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, Did you mean "I"?I
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 would express my dislike on the unsafe locker rooms. A few times my money went missing from my bag which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 me with no choice than to always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to the library with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 my study materials.

Furthermore
, improvements on the security would be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 input to the library. It can be employments of security agents or installing Possible spelling mistake found.CCTVCTVCATVCCTCCTPCCV
cctv
 cameras at This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 rooms of the study center, this would increase the trust of users and enable them This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 with a few personal belongings like their wallets and phones.

I hope my suggestions would be looked
 into

Yours faithfully
. 