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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. write a letter to the couple. In your letter -Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job -Say what else you could do to for the family -Give you reasons for wanting job

You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. write a letter to the couple. In your letter -Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job -Say what else you could do to for the family -Give you reasons for wanting job BObm
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writng this letter to let you know my interest in teaching language to your children, as it was stated in advertisement. I am a professional tutor and has been teaching this langauge from past 5years, I have been came across many students and I feel my teaching methodology will satisfy the need of children and their parents. I will be available after 7 o clock in the evening from monday to friday. Apart from language I can also assist the children in their academic works. As most of the parents remains busy, I can take care of bothn language as well as academics. It will be beneficial for parents. The reason I deserve this job is, I live closer to your home and you will find me punctual and hardworking when it comes to dedication of mine towards my work. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully Rashid
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langauge
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students and I feel my teaching methodology will satisfy the need of children and their parents. I will be available after 7 o clock in the evening from
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monday
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friday
. Apart from language I can
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assist the children in their academic works. As most of the parents remains busy, I can take care of
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bothn
language
as well
as academics. It will be beneficial for parents. The reason I deserve this job is, I
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live
closer to your home and you will find me punctual and hardworking when it
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comes
to dedication of mine towards my work.

I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
. Yours
faithfully
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Rashid

IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. write a letter to the couple. In your letter -Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job -Say what else you could do to for the family -Give you reasons for wanting job

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  American English
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156 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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