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A museum near you home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl. Unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntaryl unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the Museum director to apply for the volutary/unpaid work. in your letter -Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum -Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful -Give details of when you would be available for work

A museum near you home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl. Unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntaryl unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the Museum director to apply for the volutary/unpaid work. in your letter -Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum -Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful -Give details of when you would be available for work 5e7e
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you about my interest to do part time voluntary at the museum. I'd be grateful if you could allow me, as I am passionate about voluntary it makes me feel special if I could serve some people without any salary. People of all ages comes to museum and I prefer giving my service to them. I've been a part of several social and environmental movemets and I have the skills and qualities as a good volunteer requires. With good communication skills and problem solving abilities. I can prove mysellf if I get an opportunity. I'll be available on all Saturdays and Sundays from morning 9 to evening 4 and will be happy to spend time over there. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfullyRashid
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you about my interest to do
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
part time
voluntary at the museum.

I'd be grateful if you could
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allow
me, as I am passionate about voluntary it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me feel special if I could serve
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some
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people
without any salary.
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People
of all ages
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comes
to museum and I prefer giving my service to them.

I've been a part of several social and environmental
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movemets
and I have the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and qualities as a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
volunteer requires. With
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
communication
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and problem solving abilities. I can prove
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mysellf
if I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
an opportunity.

I'll be available on all Saturdays and Sundays from morning 9 to evening 4 and will be happy to spend time over there.

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I
look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
Possible spelling mistake found.
faithfullyRashid

IELTS letter A museum near you home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl. Unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntaryl unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the Museum director to apply for the volutary/unpaid work. in your letter -Explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum -Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful -Give details of when you would be available for work

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7 paragraphs
135 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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