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You are visiting England and one of your friends has offered to take care of the house. Inform him about you travel plan, about your house and if anything has to be taken care in the house.

You are visiting England and one of your friends has offered to take care of the house. Inform him about you travel plan, about your house and if anything has to be taken care in the house. wnNAe
Dear Sam, Hope you are doing good. So, finally, I’ve my travel planned for the England. I will be visiting England from 1st June to 18th June and I can’t thank you enough for offering to take care of the house while I’m away. The duplex which I own has all the basic amenities like gas, electricity and water running 24 hours. I’ve stocked in the fridge with your favorite drinks and snacks. I know that you are a fan of Marvel series, so, I have taken a subscription of Netflix as well so that you can enjoy your stay to the fullest. Although, there aren’t many things to be taken care of, however, please make sure that you close the lawn door during night as, otherwise, street cats might enter the house. Let me know what I should bring for you. Best wishes Gill
Dear Sam,

Hope you are doing
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good
.

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So
,
finally
, I’ve my travel planned for the England. I will be visiting England from 1st June to 18th June and I can’t thank you
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enough
for offering to take care of the
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house
while I’m away.

The duplex which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
has all the basic amenities like gas, electricity and water running 24 hours. I’ve stocked in the fridge with your favorite drinks and snacks. I know that you are a fan of Marvel series,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, I have taken a subscription of Netflix
as well
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that you can enjoy your stay to the fullest.

Although, there aren’t
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
things to
be taken
care of,
however
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that you close the lawn door during night as,
otherwise
, street cats might enter the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know what I should bring for you.

Best wishes

Gill

IELTS letter You are visiting England and one of your friends has offered to take care of the house. Inform him about you travel plan, about your house and if anything has to be taken care in the house.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
144 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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