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Formal letter to request a new accommodation arrangement

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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to request a new accommodation arrangement for me. Our new semester has begun and I came back to my dorm last week. As you may be aware, I am sharing a room with another student and there are a couple of things causing me problems by my roommate. I understand that she has a right to enjoy the space where we live as my roommate. However, she made a lot of noises and opened the music loudly while I was studying or doing my assignment. I did not concentrate on my mind and could not study my lesson well during that time. Although I tried to request her many times to quiet down during my study time she has not paid attention to my request. In addition, she makes a lot of mess and does not help in cleaning our room. Therefore, may I request you to arrange a single room for me and I prefer the quiet place, near my college. I would be really thankful if you could consider my request and take prompt action regarding this.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesireoffersuitdemandapplicationcall
request
 a new accommodation arrangement for me. Our new semester has begun and I came back to my dorm last week. As you may be aware, I am sharing a room with another student and there are a couple of things causing me problems by my roommate.

I understand that she has a right to enjoy the space where we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 as my roommate. However
, she made This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 noises and opened the music loudly
 while I was studying or doing my assignment. I did not concentrate on my mind and could not study my lesson well during that time. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
 I tried to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesireoffersuitdemandapplicationcall
request
 her This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 times to quiet down during my study time she has not paid attention to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesireoffersuitdemandapplicationcall
request
. In addition
, she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 mess and does not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in cleaning our room.

Therefore
, may I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesireoffersuitdemandapplicationcall
request
 you to arrange a single room for me and I prefer the quiet place, near my college. I would be really
 thankful if you could consider my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesireoffersuitdemandapplicationcall
request
 and take prompt action regarding this. 