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You are going to take a tour of historic place. Write an email to a travel agency you usually travel with and in you letter introduce yourself as an regular customer ,ask for more information about the city ,ask them for more information about the tour (price,dates.etc.)

You are going to take a tour of historic place. Write an email to a travel agency you usually travel with and in you letter introduce yourself as an regular customer, ask for more information about the city, ask them for more information about the tour (price, dates. etc. ) oE0ab
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request detailed information from your travel agency about the journey that I am going to in the next month. I am Dilfuza Nazarova, an English professional, and a loyal customer of your travel agency. I regularly choose your agency for visiting to historical places and I feel full satisfaction with your services. Please inform me main features of the city where I am traveling. Are ancient parts of the city near the center? I would like to enjoy the modern view of the city too. I have heard about its well known art museums and exhibitions. Therefore it would be better if our trip contained these sides of the country. If it does not take your much time, please give me detailed itinerary. First of all, the most needed information is the beginning date and length of the travel. Also I would like to know about how much it costs to stay in luxurious hotel and eating out in its restaurants for ten days. Please inform me at your earliest convenience I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Dilfuza Nazarova
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request detailed information from your travel agency about the journey that I am going to in the
next
month. I am
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Dilfuza
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Nazarova
, an English professional, and a loyal customer of your travel agency. I
regularly
choose your agency for visiting to historical places and I feel full satisfaction with your services.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
inform me main features of the city where I am traveling. Are ancient parts of the city near the center? I would like to enjoy the modern view of the city too. I have heard about its well known art museums and exhibitions.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Therefore
it would be better if our trip contained these sides of the country. If it does not take your much time,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
give me detailed itinerary.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, the most needed information is the beginning date and length of the travel.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
I would like to know about how much it costs to stay in luxurious hotel and eating out in its restaurants for ten days.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
inform me at your earliest convenience I look forward to hearing from you. Yours
faithfully
,
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Dilfuza
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Nazarova

IELTS letter You are going to take a tour of historic place. Write an email to a travel agency you usually travel with and in you letter introduce yourself as an regular customer, ask for more information about the city, ask them for more information about the tour (price, dates. etc. )

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