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Asking advice for finding a new job

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Dear Mr EllionMy name is Ann Parkinson, I am twenty- five years old, I am working as an English teacher at School which is situated in neighbour city Yorkshirk state. I would appreciate it if you would give me advice about finding a new job in the location where you are living for five years. Currently, I have financial problem to provide with my family and its monthly payment. Because of lacking of my salary at my working place. We have abundant expendures in these years, despite that we are young couple, in addition to, our family is living in a flat and also we have hired a car to go work and come back home because my working school is so far from my apartment. In fact it is not difficult to find a new place to work but none of them is not supporting our requested money, so that I am obliged to addressing you Mr Ellion, you are only person who are close person, which can help me to seeking in suitable job for me. It would be great help if you would advise me what to do like this situation, Please help as soon as possible you have time to contact with me, Thank you your suggestion in advanceYour faithully Ann Parkon

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