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You are planning to go and to study at a school overseas

You are planning to go and to study at a school overseas GNkEe
Dear Sir or MadamI would appriciate it if you would give advice about learning teaching English. I am writing to ask if you could help me with my teaching English, because that job difficult for me work on my experience in fact I have to spend much of time at school with my students and especially, I have problem on my vocabulary and my grammar skill tip. All the skills of English language not enough my mind it is hard to remember for me such kind of words. But I am really have wish to get certificate of high degree. I would appriciate it if you could give me your advice as soon as possible. Your sincerilyZamira Ahmedova
Dear Sir or
MadamI
would
appriciate
it if you would give advice about learning teaching English. I am writing to ask if you could
help
me with my teaching English,
because
that job difficult for me work on my experience in fact I
have to
spend much of time at school with my students and
especially
, I have problem on my vocabulary and my grammar
skill
tip. All the
skills
of English language not
enough
my mind it is
hard
to remember for me such kind of words.
But
I am
really
have
wish to
get
certificate of high degree. I would
appriciate
it if you could give me your advice as
soon
as possible. Your
sincerilyZamira
Ahmedova
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IELTS letter You are planning to go and to study at a school overseas

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
117 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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