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Asking advice letter to the school director

Asking advice letter to the school director LBmkG
Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing to you a letter to ask information about your school. lt would be very appreciate if you could help me as soon as possible. I have been teaching so far my local school. But l have not any international certificate to earn much money. As you know, without qualifications are not paid for you enough to study other country. As a result my salary is little. Owing to rise my wage l am going to go to the school which is situated in England. And wanted to gained many international certificates. So that l think your advice and massages are significant for my future study. Naturally, l am not aware of school. Although l endaveour to studyoverseas, l have not got any informationAs for accomadation which you wantI can send my diploma copies and some national certificates. lf my abroad studies depend on these, of c ourse, l will send them soon. in conclusionEven though you are busy your educational research, if you answer my answers about school, l will be very grateful. l look forward to recieving you good newsYours sincerelyMartha Karl.
Dear Sir or Madam. I am writing to you a letter to ask information about your
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lt
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appreciate if you could
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help
me as
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as possible. I have been teaching
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far my local
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school
.
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But
l have not any international certificate to earn much money. As you know, without qualifications are not paid for you
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enough
to study other country.
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As
a result my salary is
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little
. Owing to rise my wage l
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am
going to go to the
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school
which
is situated
in England. And wanted
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to gained
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many
international certificates.
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So
that l
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think
your advice and massages are significant for my future study.
Naturally
, l am not aware of
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school
. Although l
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endaveour
to
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studyoverseas
, l have not
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got
any
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informationAs
for
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accomadation
which you
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wantI
can
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send
my diploma copies and
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some
national certificates.
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lf
my abroad studies depend on these, of
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c ourse
, l will
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send
them
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soon
.
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in
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conclusionEven
though you are busy your educational research, if you answer my answers about
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school
, l will be
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very
grateful.
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l
look forward to
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recieving
you
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good
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newsYours
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sincerelyMartha
Karl.
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IELTS letter Asking advice letter to the school director

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
190 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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