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You are very disturbed by the noise coming from a retaurant opened nearby recently. Write a letter to the manager to stop it.

You are very disturbed by the noise coming from a retaurant opened nearby recently. Write a letter to the manager to stop it. E3jmM
Dear Sir, I am resident of Garden colony Patti. My house is situated very next to your restaurant. I inform to you that I and my family is much disturbed from heavy rowdy noise come from your restaurant and it affects our life badly. We are suffering from chronic diseases due to disturbed noise. I have already informed to you prior to this letter to stop nosing but no avail. Your clients creating unwanted loud voices, and making my family hard to live in the house nearby your restaurant, and my children do study in morning, and at that time a loud music voice come from your restaurant disturb to my children. I request to you, that I am writing this letter to you to stop disturbance, otherwise I will force to take legal action against you. Hope you will accept my advice. I shall thankful for your this kindness. RagardsRsb
Dear Sir, I am resident of Garden colony Patti. My
house
is situated
very
next
to your
restaurant
. I inform to you that I and my family is much disturbed from heavy rowdy noise
come
from your
restaurant
and it affects our life
badly
. We are suffering from chronic diseases due to disturbed noise. I have already informed to you prior to this letter to
stop
nosing
but
no avail. Your clients creating unwanted loud voices, and making my family
hard
to
live
in the
house
nearby your
restaurant
, and my children do study in morning, and at that time a loud music voice
come
from your
restaurant
disturb to my children. I request to you, that I am writing this letter to you to
stop
disturbance,
otherwise
I will force
to take
legal action against you. Hope you will accept my advice. I
shall thankful
for your this kindness.
RagardsRsb
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IELTS letter You are very disturbed by the noise coming from a retaurant opened nearby recently. Write a letter to the manager to stop it.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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